Welcome to my blog, I'm a student at Karoro School in Greymouth, New Zealand.
What a great wee story Zade! I can hear your sense of humour coming through. Keep up the great writing.
Kia ora,Wow this is the coolest story ever. My favourite part was when you said O.M.G I need that bun. Next time try and put the fly's on the side were there is not writing. well done.
Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments.
What a great wee story Zade! I can hear your sense of humour coming through. Keep up the great writing.
ReplyDeleteKia ora,
ReplyDeleteWow this is the coolest story ever. My favourite part was when you said O.M.G I need that bun. Next time try and put the fly's on the side were there is not writing.
well done.